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【百说】坐井观天已经变成好事了吗?价值观不同。还有一点,成语尽量不直接入诗,用也要是化用。壑,是个大坑,或者山谷之类的东东,田间不应该有的。又坐井、又田间,还跃池塘,真是全能型的蛙蛙。身披/迷彩/服,腿
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