| 
 
 2356| 19
 
 | 
古典诗十八期绕梁组第33讲作业帖 | 
  | ||
  | ||
  | ||
  | ||
  | ||
  | ||
  | ||
 点评
问好冷月诗友:此诗起句描写出图中之景。承句是图中最醒目之景物。起承实写。转结句虚造。特别是结句虚造的离谱。转句承结的是望天涯。入情,在思念什么人。结句虚幻,建议斟酌。 
 
 | ||
|Archiver|手机版|小黑屋|古典听风书院
( 蜀ICP备15023305号-1 )
GMT+8, 2025-11-4 08:47 , Processed in 0.397456 second(s), 28 queries .
Powered by Discuz! X3.2 Licensed
© 2001-2013 Comsenz Inc.