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古典联十高级班清华组第六讲(中)作业贴 |
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问候学友,合咏欠佳,不能让读者一看就知是咏菊花;分咏似是而非,还可以更突出一点。继续努力
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问候剑客,作业还是没按格式做,意不错,但平仄还是不过关,这方需下点功夫,期待你的进步
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