楼主: 十七
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古典诗十一期七绝第十五讲夏组作业贴: |
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问好冷月!风又雨的话,能见得星月否?愁听/和泪念,建议取其一足矣;故情感况味,宜着场境而渲染,凭物象而寄托,得其婉曲,始堪余味,个见。
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问好听雨!整体见流畅,遣词谋篇,新意尚不足。个见
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