|
|
古典诗十九中级班七律第二讲颜如组作业帖 |
| ||
| ||
| ||
点评
清风自来问好诗友:本首诗平仄出现一处错误,导致颈联出现三平尾,第54字“芭”应仄。
| ||
|Archiver|手机版|小黑屋|古典听风书院
( 蜀ICP备15023305号-1 )
GMT+8, 2025-10-26 10:15 , Processed in 0.375000 second(s), 23 queries .
Powered by Discuz! X3.2 Licensed
© 2001-2013 Comsenz Inc.