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古典诗十四期七律第十讲春组作业贴: | 
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大群老师已点评。 
 
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简评:已五载,仄仄仄。有观点,有层次,但语言表达需多加强练习。 
 
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如影老师简评:简评:观点明确,收尾呼应不够好。语言方式要多体会。韵字不在平水韵同一韵部内。 
 
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