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古典楹联十五期幽兰组第十六讲作业贴 | 
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平仄没问题。景有点隔了,出句花香明月一副很静谧的画面,通常这时候鸟类都栖息了。 
 
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还不错。继续努力。 
 
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还不错,有流水思维,向你学习。 
 
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还不错,继续努力。 
 
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