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古典联十一清新组第二十七讲作业贴(评阅老师—英子) |
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问好笑语盈然,对句一,漂亮,对句二好看,学习了
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问好谷韵,对句一,后三对字了,对句二,荷花盏是摆放橄榄瓶吗,我没试过,所以不敢妄评
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问好极北之北,对句一可以,对句二可以
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问好清风秋月,对句一前二再练,对句二可以,
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问好永不言弃,对句一,流转的有点急,云一下子不能化成柳,对句二,一句,漂亮。二句前二再练
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问好陶希明,对句一漂亮,对句二漂亮,学习了,赞一个
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