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词十五创作班第十八讲易安组作业贴,同学之间互评(以各组长安排为准) |
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楼上小姐姐评的很到位了,有个别句子组词不太顺溜,有硬凑的痕迹,
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怀旧作品,伤春作品古亦 有之,可惜过于流连于字面,感情不足
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点评不凑,小钰儿作品也很好。赏
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