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古典诗十四期第十七讲晴组作业贴: | 
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江堤独步,写的是寻春,选取物象也切题。对仗工整,牵眸笑语频稍显牵强,无大碍。诗作总体不错。 
 
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师友好,二月正芳菲可品可趣,拾春成字,多翻几意。嫩与柔择一可好?结句过于信手,未见功力。期待精彩哈。 
 
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