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古典诗十六初级班第六讲思齐组作业贴 |
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点评
白衣点评:
1.前两句已经"粽香盈",第三句何必又“菖蒲近"?既然是"菖蒲近"表示还没到端午节,既然是没到端午节,题目又何必写"端午会友"?
2.写端午会友,尾句"乡音""共月明"又成了思乡怀人之句了。
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