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究竟是何余音?令人费解。最好取用看得见的物来对联
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上下意境统一,对仗工巧,很不错哦
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缓缓轻舟令人轻松悠闲,怎么忽然来个伴啸歌?这样不好
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笛音隐野郊?怎么隐?下联最好取看得见的东东
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前四很不错,后三可酌
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不错不错,继续努力
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