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古典联八期初级班第十五讲D组作业贴 | 
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对仗工整,立意欢快。新春祥和景像。 
 
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立意比较好,对仗稍微欠缺。观和赏相近,有合掌的成分。 
 
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这幅婚联非常好,琴瑟和鸣,四代同堂,家庭和谐,一幅欢乐祥和的景像。 
 
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对仗工整 
 
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