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评:问好学友,小词,脉络清晰,但是,个别句子中,词语组合略显涩滞,不通顺。上片,起拍中的叹世一词,三拍的收交。下片起拍,有些费字了,二拍的扶掠,扶应该为拂,是为了平仄合律吗?结句扣题,望学友,以后在...
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