1351| 51
|
古典诗十七·七律第22讲秋组作业帖 |
| ||
点评
问好同学。全诗格律无误,遣词造句如行云流水,用典自然,,造景入情合理,学习啦。
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
|Archiver|手机版|小黑屋|古典听风书院
( 蜀ICP备15023305号-1 )
GMT+8, 2025-4-19 18:34 , Processed in 0.143619 second(s), 28 queries .
Powered by Discuz! X3.2 Licensed
© 2001-2013 Comsenz Inc.