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古典楹联十五期陶菊组第十四讲作业贴 | 
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词性结构有误 
 
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多产作家,给你点赞 
 
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句子不通顺 
 
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与众不同,,继续努力 
 
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词性没毛病,但是偷换了主语,而且不通顺 
 
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词性结构正确,继续努力 
 
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词性结构正确,锦衣俩字,破坏了意境 
 
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