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阳春白雪简评:问好同学,基础掌握的不错,小绝格律正确,角度独辟蹊径,合句见深意,后三早深藏,暗合首句独宿,赞!
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问好晔胥同学,小诗格律正确的,句子不太好,行文少诗意,汲养全不通,莲花,是亭亭玉立,不蔓不枝,怎么说摇曳,沉醉意。蕴诗篇随意,凑韵了。
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