731| 115
|
古典词二十四期创作班第十九讲瑶华组作业贴 |
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
点评
问好学友,学友这篇填词,很好的描写了一副桂花开时,香飘万里,月下树前,嬉戏打闹,的场景。香气不变人已老。很赞,学习了
| ||
|Archiver|手机版|小黑屋|古典听风书院 ( 蜀ICP备15023305号-1 )
GMT+8, 2024-10-27 16:30 , Processed in 0.140625 second(s), 24 queries .
Powered by Discuz! X3.2 Licensed
© 2001-2013 Comsenz Inc.