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古典联十高级班清华组第九讲作业贴 | 
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问候学友,上联还不错,下联凑了,后三结构更是不妥。这种题可以一联写梅,一联写雪,看起来清爽不凌乱,个见 
 
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问候学友,还是有些偏题了。梅雪在联里没有突出,似有似无。飞花这里偏正,断梦动宾。整联看上联可以,下联凑了 
 
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