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古典联十二第二十七讲草阁组作业贴(点评清荷老师) |
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实写的太直白了,句二联意不理解,尤其在物象上不要千篇一律!
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联意不错,个别字需再炼,联二隔景的感觉,眠有误导夜晚的意思!
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联意不错,词语表达上需努力,加油!
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联意很好!个别用词上不太妥!
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