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古典诗十四期基础第四讲春组作业贴: | 
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大姐这首不错呀,句子流畅而不俗味,清新自然,唯一遗憾的就是,四平八稳,立意欠新,总得来说很不错了,点赞!!! 
 
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问好冰雪心,作业回答认真详细,排版清爽。加油。 
 
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