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问好学友。这首诗格律无误,起句点明时间地点,所取物象符合秋日送别情景,中二联对仗亦较工稳。这首诗写得颇有古意,如今的送别大多是在车站机场,我们学诗也不需一味泥古,也可写一点符合时代气息的古诗词,个见哈
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