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问候同学:赏析不错,文笔流畅。建议对句前四再打磨一下。
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问候同学:六要素无误,当中不如中之中诗家语之味。出句不是山里行走,应该是隐居。☕️
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问候同学:赏析不错,对句前四有流转,度动词,心,名词。
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问候同学:析联正确,对句前四再酌,风雨不来就不自在了吗😄
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