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古典诗十八期溪山组第七讲作业帖 | 
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此诗脉络清晰,起承转合表达流畅,赞一个!只是个人觉得承句的“只恐”换成“只道”更好些,合句的“竞芬芳”改成“绽芬芳”更恰当些,毕竟菊花开的时候,众芳稀疏。加油,继续努力! 
 
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