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古典联十清华组初级班第四讲作业贴 |
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问候点到为止,对句孤字处应为仄声,且孤字与出句气氛不对。上联暖,下联冷了。希继续努力。
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问候双叶子,对句孤平了。需好好记记入声字。对句太直白,无诗意,还需继续努力。
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