|
词十四基础班第四讲星辰组作业贴,单层大陈,双层大梦 |
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
点评
问好耕耘学友;已经云遮暮掩了,搁哪来的红霞呀,怎么能看见蒲草葳蕤呈翠玉,鲜花绮丽展娇颜。格律韵步均正确。继续努力吆。
| ||
| ||
|Archiver|手机版|小黑屋|古典听风书院
( 蜀ICP备15023305号-1 )
GMT+8, 2025-9-10 06:53 , Processed in 0.124710 second(s), 23 queries .
Powered by Discuz! X3.2 Licensed
© 2001-2013 Comsenz Inc.