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古典学院词十五期初级班第二讲梦窗组作业贴,评阅老师:宁静8-17楼,梅雪18-27楼,... |
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问好诗友!一题回答正确,再详细点更好。小令写家长之美,由里到外,景色宜人。第二句表达不算好,再斟酌。结句要回扣首句,感觉回扣不好。个见,不当处海涵!
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