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古典诗十四期秋组七律第十五讲作业: |
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问好清源,纵观全诗,首联点明时间和环境,颔联写景,颈联转入抒情,尾联景结,有余味,赞一个!但细读此诗,颔联和颈联情景不够圆融,遣词造句不够清通,个见,说错勿怪!继续加油!——秋云飞
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