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格律无误,第五,第十一,对句欠妥,总体不错。良
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对句10失替失对。填空尚可,加强练习,尽可能语言流畅
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对句6失替失对,对句10,13词性有误,填空题后两个不错。对完了多读几遍,尽可能通顺。良
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对出来的基本平仄无误,结构无误。平时对句练少了。填空不错。继续加油哈
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