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古典诗十七初级班夏组第二讲作业贴 |
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乡人简评,问同学好,作业及时,值得表扬,第一题,未标平仄,入声字找的全面,二题,出句挺美,与画面相协,能表达出画面的内容,“诗书兑酒”这句前四挺好后三再斟酌。炊烟这句挺好,虚实同收,挺好的!加油
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