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古典词二十二期初级班第五讲舒荷组作业贴 |
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问好学友,词格韵部无误。整体脉络清晰,启承有致,语句清丽工整,气脉流畅,过渡自然,转结得体,布局谋篇恰当,造句凝练韵律和谐婉约,意境词味浓郁。偶句工稳,一阕好词,赏学了
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通过望月,引起对昨日的美好回忆,今昔对比,总体好
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