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古典楹联十五期幽兰组第十一讲作业贴 | 
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后三不工整 
 
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可以吧 
 
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棒棒哒 
 
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作业用功,对句工稳,赞 
 
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后三在想想 
 
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非常棒,赞 
 
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非常棒,赞 
 
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棒棒哒 
 
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不错,只是芦花,苇丛太近了 
 
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