楼主: 燕燕于飞
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古典楹联十五期陶菊组第二十八讲作业贴 |
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跑远了,十万八千里了,注意上联情感
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何堪冷月案前移,仅供参考
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后三再酌,意有了
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忽思是不是更合理一点
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梦中寻
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漾,我没查到平声
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后三再酌
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唯期亲友梦中逢
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