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古典楹联十五期陶菊组第二十八讲作业贴 | 
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跑远了,十万八千里了,注意上联情感 
 
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何堪冷月案前移,仅供参考 
 
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漂亮,赞👍 
 
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后三再酌,意有了 
 
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忽思是不是更合理一点 
 
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梦中寻 
 
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漾,我没查到平声 
 
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后三再酌 
 
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唯期亲友梦中逢 
 
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