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古典诗二十期基础班夏组第二讲作业帖 | 
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第1题找到了入声字准确:一、百、雪、泊
第2题格律准确,语句顺畅,1句“翩翩”与“飞”意重。3句“清与碧”意重,5句“湖”红”挤韵,不算大毛病,可改“江”字。 
 
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