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古典诗二十二期基础班攸宁组第八讲作业帖 |
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简评:本诗起笔醉里狂歌,意气未消;次句追念旧游,以飘蓬喻漂泊,承转自然。后两句回溯当年心境,寒灯收束,以景结情,含蓄蕴藉,有自省之味。不足之处:“青云愿”意象偏常见,少专属感;结句“照夜终”造语略生,
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简评:起写昔时樽前欢笑、无忧无虑,鲜活灵动;转以识尽东风寄今时感悟,结句空庭花落、月色满楼,景中含情,今昔对照自然,以景结情,余韵悠长。不足之处:“东风味”稍虚,表意略朦胧,如能扣住往事落点会更贴...
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