楼主: 世凡
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古典联十北大组初级班第八讲作业贴 |
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出律了哈。。荷叶满塘蛙声鸣=平仄仄平平平平
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问候泡泡,作业完成较好,但对句斜风欠妥,请再斟酌,
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问候盈然,作业认真,但对句翩鸿与横影词性有误,望再斟酌
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问候落叶,作业认真,但对句中,平仄有误请再考虑对句
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