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诗十三初级班第九讲薄荷组作业贴 |
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风流岁月老师评:从图片上看牧童悠闲的样子,像是放牛回来了,所以说可以吧。
作业引用了“成语”,以后慢慢要克服写绝句时用成语的习惯。
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风流岁月老师评:写的比较全面,点赞
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风流岁月老师评:写的比较全面,点赞
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