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古典词十九初级班撷芳组第十五讲作业 |
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宁静老师点评:问好向阳花!这首小词填的比较婉约。上片写景,进入清愁的氛围,下片转情。词中有个车句子模糊,深墅,不好理解。换头句子不好理解,难道不分男女,既不分,何谈缘分。结句悬月成空无由来。
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