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对联二穿杨词性不符,杨是名词吧。绝句立意新颖,转合出彩,不足是承句的海涯稍嫌凑词了。点赞!
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对联过关点赞,绝句千古不变的话题,唯转句的清心了都斟酌。或是寂寞常欣君与共啥的,那样与合句的联系就更加紧密了哈,个见!
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对联过关,绝句立意新颖,转合出彩,起句中分费解,很喜气的作品,为你点赞!
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