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古典楹联十五期陶菊组第八讲作业贴 | 
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后三再酌 
 
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注意格式 
 
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格律无误,继续努力 
 
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谈字再酌 
 
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对句挺漂亮,可惜格式不对 
 
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不错,继续努力 
 
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格律无误,继续努力 
 
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不错,继续努力 
 
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