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古典楹联十五期陶菊组第十二讲作业贴 | 
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句子2221,对句平仄无误,意境上需加强 
 
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后三凑了,再酌 
 
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注意格式,2221 
 
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2221,第一个不错,第二个前四后三断了 
 
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2221,对句宽了 
 
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注意格式 
 
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